Black Poetry : To My Friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EbonyQueen06, Jun 7, 2004.

  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never thought I had feelings 4 u
    U wuz just a goofy ***** that made me laugh
    But then I found out u was in my 1st period class,
    I wasn't at all flabberghasted
    That's when I found out u had a pesonality
    You took some **** seriously and your life wasn't all laughs n jokes
    Even though I had a man I was startin to get madd feelins 4 u
    But I neva really told u
    I don't mess with dudes who go to da same school as me
    Who would've thought I'd be admitting I like
    N wana be your girl
    But I'll just keep this secret on pen n' pad
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I totally agree with you...that's a very good place to keep it :luvv: ...nice poem. Keep your pen moving...in the right direction. (I'm counting on you) and thanks for sharing this with us.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done and a sweet safe harbor to comfort it in
    flow on !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep your pen moving
    nice scribe about inner feelings
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Writing is just wonderful aint it :) may it be as good for you as it is for me (and it seems to be doin JUS that :)) :grouphug:
     
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    Nothing like the ability to convey those thoughts on paper, nice piece.
     
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