Black Poetry : to my friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Aug 13, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have loved you
    seen your inner beauty
    felt your passion
    shared your dreams, troubles, conclusions
    stepping away from it
    even temporarily
    makes me afraid
    to be on my own
    fighting my own battles
    viewing your aesthetics
    like the ink on your skin
    a vision of who you are
    your own stages in life
    a mere participant
    on the stage that you create
    i love you so hard
    feel you so deeply
    you will never understand
    the places that you touch
    the secretive place, the lover space
    the protective place, that sexy space
    the youth space and father place
    cause you are bad
    not bad meaning bad but bad meaning good
    you are you
    i am just a spectator
    admiring you
    i would give you the world
    in the palm of my hand if i could
    because you fill so many places
    in my own life
    lover, wife, mother, friend
    that it almost seems natural
    in its being
    we have always said
    it is what it is
    time will surely pass
    just a scribe to say i love you
    you know this
    it's real
    and it will forever last
    a special place in my heart
    peace
    until next time
    my friend
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa !
    a very very touching piece
    this was so deep down felt
    hope the Friend read this ..

    very beautifully pose'd
    the inner feelings & emotions flow'd right here
    i was on the outside looking in and felt it ........
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Tight, tight, tight. And very nice.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the rhythm to this one :)
     
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