Black Poetry : to me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jul 10, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i appreciate you because
    you love your skin
    and even when trials
    bruised your ribs
    u stood strong, never wavering

    when tears fell like stars
    from the sky
    u stood, and asked why
    but did not run

    u, are the stongest person
    i have met, and tho
    u have regrets,still u smile
    and learn and live

    u don't punish your enemies
    u just love them more
    playing it cool
    then they rest at your foot stool

    u keep hope even when
    it looks so bleak
    u stay so strong
    when other get weak

    so nice to meet you

    self....
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte,
    got to love ya self
    before you love
    anyone else.



    peace
    -story
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed love thou self
    forth others will too
    dis awesome tyte
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is great! I feel the same way about me! LOL. keep em comin
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a beautifl poem more....:)
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was an extraordinary piece...loving thyself...what a strong message...for all of us...but also if we are being as giving and "selfless" as this piece reinforces.