Black Poetry : TO LUST LOVE

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  1. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    Dont say you love me because my inside's get soakin wet,
    you cant say you love me because we recently just met,

    TO LUST LOVE

    So you wanna buy me the better things in life because you so call care,
    If we got caught up In a lusting moment and you had a disease Would you still hit It bare?

    TO LUST LOVE

    Now Is this loving me,or protending to be,

    TO LUST LOVE

    Your in love with the way I throw It back,You love da way my A-- Is phat.
    Truth is you lust me, never loved me.

    Gladly,to lust love I was able to see before it recently hit me.

    TO LOVE LUST
     
  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow in pointing out the difference between love and lust.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i jus recently went through something jus like this girl...but im glad i came to my senses before and realized the difference...nice poem..
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi $ms>GET IT
    Welcome to the house of love, your flows are nice... continue to pen them
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice piece
     
  6. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    Alot of people throw da word love around just because it sounds good.Thanks 4 da comments and TRU love.
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Important to know the difference, especially in this day and age when sleeping with the wrong one can kill you. I liked the way you posed this.
     
  8. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knowing the difference between
    lust and love is major.
    the only thing that they have in common
    is that they both 4 letters,but two
    different meanings.
    Nice piece,girl.
     
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