Black Poetry : To love so much......

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  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To love something so much
    Is to give your soul to it.
    You think that it will always be there
    It relieves the tension within.
    You can't think of life with out it
    Until it's gone.
    Emotion strikes through your crazed mind
    your face covers with tears.
    How is life going to be now?
    After your soul and heart have been shattered?
    Broken pieces are lost
    Never to become what it used to be.
    One_Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TRUELY WHATS ONCE BROKEN CAN AND WILL BE
    MEND IN TYME ......THE LOVE THAT ONCE WAS
    STILL IS WITHIN SELF ........YET SOMETYME
    WE LOSE CONTROL OF SELF IN THE MIST OF LOVE
    GIVEN OUR HEART AND SOUL ONLY TO BE STRIPED
    THEIRS A BRIGHTER DAY AHEAD.....PRAYER HELPS
    BIG TYME U WILL LOVE IN THE SAME LIGHT AS BEFORE
    I KNOW! I FLY LOW I SEE ALL I FEEL THE EMOTIONS
    ROLL LIKE THUNDER ....OUTCAST SAY YA DAY IS NEAR
    HOLD YA HEAD UP HIGH.....
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One,

    Nice!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one love

    everything changes
    i mean EVERYTHING changes at some point
    but as much as things change
    things stay the same
    hang in there
    loving your work
    as always
    peace
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To love so much...

    ...is deep.real.magic.

    when it leaves us it hurts. only to return with a different face. lovely piece.

    one love,blak
     
  6. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is hard to give something up that you love so much. Thanks for feeling me on this one guys.
    One_Love
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are soo right, one_love. i am really feelin' this piece, too. keep on scribin', i'm watchin'. smiles to you, friend.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep,One_love,but hard to answer.One thing is true,God's love will never break your soul, I find strength in that.and that's how "I" am able to go on each day.
    Lovin this one......
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    very nice flow One_Love

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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