Black Poetry : To love a Playa

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Nov 25, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are sweet
    Your touch, soft and smooth like butter
    But I hesitate
    I’m tense
    Quite
    Watchful
    The disclaimer branded on your forehead
    Proclaims “Player”
    But your eyes
    Your eyes
    Exude “safety”
    Warmth
    Love
    Your words
    Sexy, catlike, deliberate
    Makes my insides melt
    My thighs quiver
    And my inner most …….wet
    I can’t get a handle
    On you
    My third eye
    Is opened to the possibility
    of us
    but my heart
    my heart
    beats slow , when your near
    cautious , wary
    which to follow ?
    my mind
    or my body?
    Can I trust this?
    Us?
    You?
    Your words are sweet
    Your touch is smooth
    Your eyes are safe
    But are you ?

    Natasha
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha, we have all loved a playa...but you can tell before you give in...time reveals every hand. I liked this piece, i have been there.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!! only ya heart knows
    what one feel is in da thoughts of what's real
    dis was awesome and makes one think

    well i thought it ova
    my answer is .....................((YES))

    nice flow poetess.
     
  4. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have to agree with redlady here..

    nice peice
     
  5. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    everyone has had that playa we jus knew was safe. and sometimes he just mite change but othas...well...otha times, we should have listened to that inner voice.
     
  6. MissPoetik

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    yup... i've been there before too. i just had to take the time to realize if it was real or not. physical admiration or mental admiration?
     
  7. PositiveMindset

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    It's better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.
    Follow your heart and your playa may stop playing.
    Speaking from experience.
     
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