Quiet Poetry Lounge : To Lose

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 24, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Night comes, star glow, silence speaks
    To love a thought
    To breathe a heart
    To cry a truth
    To remember a lost
    Lost hope
    Lost belief
    Lost, Lost, Lost
    It is all I know
    The thought of the unknown
    I dream of soul
    Memory of manhood
    The lost of manhood
    The dream of manhood
    To touch is to lose
    To dream is to die
    To feel is to hide
    The meaning of lost is to lose
    Rage at the sun
    Cling to the warm of the earth
    Drown in the seas
    Rise to the clouds
    Too dream of being free
     
  2. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madly introspective. I was stabbed with beauty. You have to read this more than once to really absorb what u need to absorb. I was feelin' you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte joint i'm moving this to the poetry forum
    this forum for Haikus ................................
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful
    Lost in the conception
    Being free-Well done poet
     
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    Awesome piece poet, keep spilling it
     
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    keep up the good work love your flow, flow on poet.:star:
     
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