Black Poetry : to know you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Jun 13, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to see your eyes...
    we face to face
    trace the ethereal
    slip into the vortex of your vision
    see...
    I want to fall into the windows
    of your soul
    if only just to know the you
    that is most you
    draw me in
    send me down corridors of your psyche
    send me stumbling in the darkness
    of your inner being
    in search of the lighted essence
    send me softly bumping into
    the insides of your every expression
    ever questing you
    lace me with your mood-ed hues
    down your inner avenues
    to bring me to the true
    ever wonderful heart of you
    go ahead and show you
    to me
    to know you...

    (c)06/03/Michael
     
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    Shango Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo, my brotha this here piece is tight....man really I liked the way this flowed............................nice array of visions.........Yeah...nice
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Shango!
    glad you felt me on this!
    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mannnnnnnnnn!!!! skrybe ladies look out !
    the depth of dis flow was awesomeeeeeee!!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heye skrybe,

    This is a beautiful portrait of imagery and flow!! I love it.

    Thanks for this one!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  6. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich! lol The ladies have nothin' to fear from me
    I'm so not on the cyber-hunt!
    Peace my pahtnah in poetix!

    Thanx Sierra! I'm pleased you liked this one!
    Much love to ya!
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ttttttttyyyyyyyytttteeee!!! thats all i can say, ur are soooo tyte!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Poeticallyspeakin!
    That's hecka cool droppin' love
    like that! Makes a brotha feel good!
    btw I'd love for you to check my site
    and drop a few lines!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Cindy!
    Thanx Sweetheart!
    makin my day and what not:blush:
    Much love to ya!
    And when you get a chance
    please check out my site! It's
    not anywhere close to Destee's
    website but it's aaiight!
    I hope to have it compliment this site
    somehow... anyway I'll stop beggin' lol.
    Thanx and Much love to ya!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Skybe7, you got skills.....:) Mad skills!!!!!...deep flow poet!