Black Poetry : To Kaila,from Daddy

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To Kaila,

    i love your eyes,your face,i love the way you sound too..
    i love your ur smile,ur laugh,i love everything about you...
    when the clouds storm over and im feelin worn out from the day...
    i put ya picture by my bed and daydream about you as i lay...
    eyes closed,
    you're the only lady in my life
    i'll die fo',
    oh besides my mama and my wife..
    and your glow,
    is rendered to me as Heaven itself...
    everyother petty thing i own is like a mere peasant to your wealth..
    my baby,i wanna ball you up and kiss you...
    it brings tears to my eyes to hear "daddy i miss you"
    im fightin for you ,with all my might and my soul...
    i got one foot in this battle,steppin' on a tight rope...
    never tried to fold,
    cause i think of back when...
    months ago me and you were as tight as old freinds...
    and you were only 3 when you left me,now your 3 and a half
    thats 6 months since you really spent time and seen ur dad...
    im right here baby boo,what they say may be true
    but you're my heart,i miss those levels of love you take me to..
    and some say im a crazy fool,to be fightin for you
    others admire,cause some did it and went tired,
    but they dont know desire or have the fire in em like your papi do
    you taught me how to love,how to stand up right and stay true
    little do you know this this,but when the time comes near
    i'll whisper in your ear,
    "im so thankful for you love ,have no fear,Daddys here"

    -Love Dad
     
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    This was beautiful
    I hope I have a seed
    One day to show this much love
    Very Nice Lurk
     
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    "Dads don't need to be tall and broad shouldered and clever.

    Love makes them so."


    writer: Pam Brown
     
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    This was so beauitful. Wonderful piece:great:
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

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    beautiful...
     
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    heartfelt joint man...
    keep flowin...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    You put your heart into this piece, so obvious that she means the world to you, quite touching poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was warm and very well felt deeply
    u express within .........lovin your joint here.
     
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    write her everyday if you have to
    let her know who you are
    for girls that do not know daddy
    are girls without propellars for their helicopter

    people underestimate
    the importance of her first man
    I can tell you with no resistance
    do all things positive to take a stand

    That little girl is one of a kind
    you are the only one who can tell her
    for all mankind
    baby girl ... you too precious to walk that road

    take evey opportunity to let her know your step
    It is the greatest gift you can give her
    to know daddy's got her back

    cause life becomes real stupid
    when everything falls off track


    I wish my daddy thought i was half that special

    your love for her is better than fort knox
     
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    re: hi

    good-evening LURK,


    just checking out a few poems, etc...


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    im right here baby boo,what they say may be true
    but you're my heart,i miss those levels of love you take me to..
    and some say im a crazy fool,to be fightin for you
    others admire,cause some did it and went tired,
    but they dont know desire or have the fire in em like your papi do
    you taught me how to love,how to stand up right and stay true
    little do you know this this,but when the time comes near
    i'll whisper in your ear,
    "im so thankful for you love ,have no fear,Daddys here"

    -Love Dad

    ==
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    heart felt piece, as it's always nice to see brothers stepping to the plate when it comes to thy offspring... willing and able to peform thy fatherly duties, as sadly many of thy youth these days are being raised by only one parent... do print this out and frame it my latino brother... in all keep bringing joy when it comes to thy beautiful daughter...


    have a nice night...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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