Black Poetry : To: JP also Attn: Tamara

[phenomenalwoman]

i dont know who all read my poem, but i decided to erase it. posting it definitely isnt something a phenomenal woman would do. i allowed myself to get hurt and it doesnt make me feel any better to hurt him back or someone else. it was raw emotion, but something i should have kept private.

 

[watzinaname]

Nothing wrong with raw emotions. Letting it out can be very freeing, keep flowing, definitely emotive.

 

[Destee]

Phenomenalwoman ... wow Sister ... this is deep ... uuhhhh ... is that his real name ... in the title ... ... oh my goodness!! ... uuhhh ... if so, it might be best not to include it in the title/peace. I can feel your desire to hurt him, but please, don't do it here.

Nice Poetry!



Destee

 

[phenomenalwoman]

point well taken, it was his real name so i changed it to his nickname

 

[Destee]

k Sister ... thank you ...



Destee