Black Poetry : To: JP also Attn: Tamara

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Jan 24, 2004.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know who all read my poem, but i decided to erase it. posting it definitely isnt something a phenomenal woman would do. i allowed myself to get hurt and it doesnt make me feel any better to hurt him back or someone else. it was raw emotion, but something i should have kept private.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing wrong with raw emotions. Letting it out can be very freeing, keep flowing, definitely emotive.
     
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    Phenomenalwoman ... wow Sister ... this is deep ... uuhhhh ... is that his real name ... in the title ... :eeek: ... oh my goodness!! ... uuhhh ... if so, it might be best not to include it in the title/peace. I can feel your desire to hurt him, but please, don't do it here.

    Nice Poetry!

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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    point well taken, it was his real name so i changed it to his nickname
     
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    k Sister ... thank you ... :love:

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    Sister Phenomenalwoman ... the only way we can allow ourselves to be hurt, is by allowing ourselves to care and love, risk we all have taken. The "phenomenal" in us, is what keeps us from letting the pain pull us to places beneath us. You're beautiful, stay encouraged Sister :)

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