Black Poetry : To him.....my fantasy

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right now your just a fantasy....
    This nubian king with locs made of gold
    Brown skin that looks to have been touched by god himself
    and lips the color of cocoa beans
    A beautiful black brother.

    I close my eyes and i feel you as if you were here....
    Your hands rough against my soft skin
    Your breaths kissing my breaths
    There's electricity between us.
    Your eyes roaming my curves in admiration.....
    I feel you.
    But right now your just a fantasy.
    Your voice Is like the sun dancing across waters
    It quickens my heartbeat...
    and dampens my flesh.
    You are a craving i have yet to taste
    Because right now your just a fantasy.

    When i wake i realize that
    Your hands have been replaced by mine
    and your breaths were actually the cool summer breeze caressing my lips
    and your voice was just a track from my favorite mixtape
     
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    Hi Sister guttapoetfromny ... Welcome Home ... :yaay: :yaay: :yaay:

    YESSSSS ... beautiful fantasies ... i want him too ... does he have a Brother or Daddy or sump'n ... :)

    Shoot ... this makes me wanna take a nap right now ... :wink:

    Good to be reading you again. Hoping all is well.

    Thanks for coming home and sharing ... :love:

    Love You!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Lovely piece!
     
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  4. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes yes yes it feels good to be back!
     
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    Very nice, Sister Poet guttapoetfromny! A true pleasure to read you, again.

    (smile)
     
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