Black Poetry : To Have and To Hold

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  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    I love you so very much
    I just long to feel your touch
    Your soft hands across my face
    The sweet warmth of your gentle embrace
    To feel your kiss upon my lips
    No one can pull me away from this
    To have your fingers run through my hair
    I would give anything to be there
    To hear the words " I Love You" whispered in my ear
    Takes away all my worries, and all my fears
    To hear your heart beating, when i lay my head on your chest
    Soothes and calms me, i think you know the rest
    To touch you, to hold you, the softness of your skin
    There's no better place, that i have ever been
    To be near you foever, this is my choice
    To have and to hold, till death do us part, i think you know the drill
    Even afther one hundred years i will love you still

    To my Lovely wife and my beautifl daughter, I love u guys so much.
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Blacklove, :wave:

    This is a beautiful piece!! :toast: :toast: :toast:

    What a lovely way to express your love for your family.

    Very nice read!!

    All my best to you.

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Blacklove, much respect!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to echo 1Poet, nuf respect.
    Peace
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so beautiful...wonderful... :) lovely
    Peace
     
  6. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautifully posed ......u know i'm lovin dis one
     
  8. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    SWEEEEEEET !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love peeps. hope to get more reply's
     
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