Black Poetry : To Have All of You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, May 9, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have all of you
    would be like
    the sun
    opening up and releasing its version
    of enlightenment to the masses
    showering radiantly upon everyone
    like
    the sun kissed flowers that have blossomed
    from shimmering rays, their scent
    creating an enticing aroma erupting rapture
    leaving my olfactory senses spent
    like
    the botanical sweetened air whirling and
    swirling into wind, softly embracing me
    slowly surrounding all of me flowing
    into a warm blanket for eternity
    like
    a heavenly possessed soul quite taken by
    you, one spirit cascading into the other
    uniting into a bond sent from the One above
    creating our own piece of Eden to discover
    to have all of you....
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: To Have

    Watz, this is a very beautiful poem.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poetrymama, that was quite kind of you poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet to have and hold sweet piece
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sistah lady Poet,

    This is truly the definition of sheer BLISS...

    Much Admiration,
    Akilah
    :bowdown:
     
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    You have my undivided attention, girl... very special.
     
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    I agree with Poetrymama this is a very beautiful piece. When i read it i feel all pecial and u should too!! :fairy:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice to know you found this to be sweet Rich, thank you brotha.
    I am truly humbled by you Akilah, thank you so much sista.
    Thank you for saying so 1poet, much appreciated.
    Aww, Blatinapoet, that was awfully nice, thank you poet.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh now that's what I call a whirlwind eternal love, anyway the wind blows will be alright. What a "Heavenly Flavor" this had. And original I might add. Very well written poet. Thanks for the float
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your oh so kind words queent, I appreciate your response sis.