Quiet Poetry Lounge : To Do or Not To Do. That is the Question

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cherryblossom, Jun 29, 2009.

  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Flight E.T.A says when….
    Next stop, the hotel room and settled in
    Freshen up. Put on a slinky dress
    Sprayed w/a soft scent to tease and impress
    I want my every movement to enrapture
    All his attention I plan to snare and capture…

    Dinner and drinks at 8
    Discussion and desire, my bait
    I want my every word, straight to his mind, a path to chart
    I want the sound of my laughter to lighten and gladden his heart

    As he watches my lips move, he’ll envision them kissing him
    He’ll be mesmerized when I lick the salt from my Margarita’s rim…

    Two hours have passed. We’re still at the table
    Not noticing the time, just pulled by an invisible cable
    That connects him to me
    Neither of us expecting such a bonding
    To this degree
    It’s now 10 o’clock, but the night’s just begun
    Neither of us ready for this time to be done
    So, a quick hand-held jaunt
    To his favorite jazz haunt
    And we sip and talk and laugh some more
    Sometimes, swaying together out on the floor

    By now, it’s a little past midnight.
    Him wishing and me mentally debating an invite
    Back to my room…..
    But, I don’t want him to assume
    So, I’ll think on it while he takes me back
    But, when I look into his eyes, I almost get a heart attack
    Seeing the raw, open passion emblazoned there
    All night long, they beckoned me to share
    With him what he, obviously, felt for me
    His every light touch, a silent plea….

    12:45
    At my hotel, we finally arrive
    And now is the hour of TRUTH!
    Will I? or Won’t I?
    Perhaps just bid him good bye
    With thanks for a lovely evening......

    Decisions! Decisions! :wink:


    (To Be Continued....)
     
  2. Siren

    Siren Active Member MEMBER

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    GO FOR IT!!!!!!

    Loved the poem sis, I can definitely feel the power of passion. Sounds like a dream to me..........:qqb015:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you much, Sister Siren!





    LOL! Was it LIVE or what it MEMOREX?! :wink:
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte poem. stop playin and do the dam* thing, you know u want to :)
     
  5. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    LOL! Who told you?! :lol:


    But, stay tuned...there's more! :wink:
     
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    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cblossom, this almost seems like a flowback to hodee's "she must"......I enjoyed both the woman and the man's view.................i see a collaboration brewing........humm.......(?)
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Wow, Joice. I didn't even think about it as a response to Hodee's piece!

    But, thanx for the feedback! Perhaps, Hodee and I do need to work on something together. He asked me when I first came and I wasn't ready yet.
     
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    Sister cherryblossom
    Are you ready now...

    Decisions! Decisions! :wink:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    :lol:


    Well, I aint neva scurred, Bro. Hodee! So, YOU start it, and I'LL finish it! :toast:


    IT'S ON!
     
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    SNUGLI360

    I SAY WAIT YOU KNOW THE OLD SAYING GOES, ONE NIGHT OF PASSION CAN GIVE YOU A LIFETIME OF PAIN JUST FOOD FOR THOUGHT.
     
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