Black People : To cleanse the mind

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  1. Kevin Ervin

    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To cleanse the mind, let the soul silently judge all cycles to all boxed "thoughts" from "the confusion" into a flowing of balance and harmony... Confusion is defined as boxed "thought": Minds disconnected from the every command of thy very soul... A mind that is no more. Kevin D. Ervin 2007 c.
     
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    big things in little proverbs

    Definitely enlightened by this piece. Some writers don't know the shock value of quick phrases with deep meaning. That's all jesus was said to speak paralbes, proverbs and phrases. He touched so many with those. And to this day they are interpreted in the lives of many.

    Sha'iyn Abdul Quwdus


    p.s Talk about being hypocritical, my reply is longer than your write. Props Kevin (Ka- Vine)
     
  3. Kevin Ervin

    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know too much about religion... But I know that the truth is always short, precise and to the point... It is its own entity; it is pre-existent, it is ever-present... It is the doer of all... And yeah I saw that, lol. Kevin
     
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    on the L word

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    Goddess, Sha'iyn does have a way of getting your head doesn't she? LOL.


    First of all, i'm a brother. LOL
    Secondly, If I get into your head
    my works usually make sure I exit the building on a good note.
    anyway, I hope they do
    Poetry was created to persuade, penetrate and provide the reader with a piece of the writer's own mind.
    A good poet knows how to wrap it all up and make a point (or several).
    A good poet is galactically-daring but, down-to-Earth
    A good poet can say a lot with a little
    A good poet can take criticism and turn it into another thread
    A good poet is dead
    Forever trying to wake hisself through Jesus-like scripture
    Until a messiah tears down what they have written
    and a lyrical battle occurs
    that's beef
    A good poet bows out
    and eventually wins the war of words
    through the best poetry known to man...
    Silence
     
  5. Kevin Ervin

    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oopps, sorry bro, my ignorance, don't take it personally.
     
  6. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    A good poet is a matter of opinion...thanks for yours!...and yes, "SILENCE IS AN EXCELLENT POEM", but only for those who are in tune with it. In terms of the masses in need of elevation, silence does not work as there are no vibrations they can tune into that will elevate their consciousness to another level.
     
  7. Kevin Ervin

    Kevin Ervin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agreed Keita... Our masses of people simply cannot afford to be silent anymore... It is the silence that we must speak...
     
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