Black Poetry : to busy dreamin

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Dec 12, 2003.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I've been to busy dreamin it to do it
    to busy dreamin to make all my dreams come true
    to busy dreamin of love to love
    to busy hatin to hate
    to busy sittin alone on a shelf
    to be on a shelf
    in my dreams
    seeing the moon and the stars
    and loving a love from afar
    to busy dreaming not givin or livin
    to busy dreaming not sharing or being
    to busy dreaming to see
    to busy dreaming to be...
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l feel this.
    it's time to get busy and stop dreaming!

    tyte peace!!
    jh.
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a tight scribe
    build from the dreams
    Peace
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    jh
    bluewater
    thanks...i see the kinds of flow that work best here at destee...
    my "esoteric" side don't seem to rush inside y'all..
    i'm glad you got this
    I of course left out a line...
    which is to busy feelin to feel..
    but like the turtle i move slowly...but focused
    and jh this was as old one...i definitely do more than dream it...altho i still do some of that.
    thanks, both of you.....encouragement and support are always appreciated..
    and so is real criticism....
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya whispers from da dream
    mental play working flow on
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this
    i feel where ya coming from
    tight write
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the concept
    being busy doesn't mean being effective
    being busy doesn't mean you're accomplishing anything
    just my absorption of the flow...

    nice work!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this...too much contemplating--not enough experiencing. I've been there all too often.
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $$rich$$
    mzblkangel
    watzinaname
    angelicsage
    that is a poem...
    filled with many hues
    and deepy is deeply
    thanking u's....
     
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