Black Poetry : To brother $$RICH$$

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Sep 6, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dark clouds
    descend to choke the sun
    trivialize it's existence
    when the demons come out to play
    and vanadlize our days
    our minds
    our hearts
    rape us of those we love
    so we can no longer
    hold them again or
    give dap to or
    just laugh about
    nothing and
    cry about everything
    all the time

    I wonder why we ask
    why so much when
    understanding is so much easier
    and why breathing becomes
    harder than translating a language
    that doesn't even exist and why pain
    is a language that we accept but never
    really understand

    "God needs angels..."
    is the only way i can figure how to cope
    without adorning every tear we cry
    with why..

    (c)2002 garrison

    It took me awhile to try and articulate what
    cannot be articulated. Excuse me if I fail brother.
    My soul weeps for you and yours. God bless.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is tight flow blak...I know Rich will appreciate this one here...
     
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    Great touch Blak.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the dark clouds seem to be floating by too regularly these days.:(

    THANKS for flowing, Blak.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Verb within my heart i see the light yet darkness ova cast
    da thoughts so i walk within my space yet not alone
    brutha thank you very much........hold me up a while so i can
    smile again.....$R
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt brother...peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz verb it's so wonderful to call upon so many at these
    tymes of need a call a word means a million to me
     
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