Black Poetry : to betta dayz

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to betta dayz/ to new J's/ to sour skittles on a hot summa day/to betta dayz

    to rainy nights laying next to someone special/to cuddling afta sex/to betta dayz

    to family runions/seeing cuzins u once fought/to betta dayz

    to listening to anthony david all day long/ over and over/ to betta dayzto that first kiss/ to the color purple/to betta dayz

    to goodnights and i love u's/to that smell that glides pass my nose as ur presence passes by/ to betta days

    to hearing ur voice on the other end after all those busy days when i couldnt call my best friend/to betta dayz

    to the beauty of when ur man licks ur tender spots even after he's being at work/to them dayz

    to 360* waves/to locks/curls/dreds/ to nautural afros/to them dayz

    to knowing ur man is only comming home to you/every night/ to betta dayz

    to grandma cooking/waiting/ after all year in college

    to the feeling of steamy water/dripping down my body/ as i join you in the shower/to betta dayz

    to telephones/communication/yahoo/ when ur man is across the country fight for ur country/like somewhere in Iraq/to betta dayz

    to them days when im having memories of love making with you/ rather than making sex minutes of lust that gaze my time

    to like falling in love and never wanting to walk away/ even after the drama and arguements/to them dayz

    to betta days/like having a condom when needed/ having one line show than 2/after an immnese night of action

    to feeling rich in life's love even tho ur pockets may be empty/and im broke everyday

    to seeng moms live stress free/ with no worries abot when and how the bills will be paid/to betta dayz

    to loosing my virginity to a man /i continue to grow a frinedship with everyday/depsite the end of us
    to betta dayz

    to protecting my temple wit clothes i define/ rather clothes that define me/ to betta dayz

    days of committment and understanding in presious times of need/

    to betta dayz
    to first expirences
    to spontanious moments
    to acting a fool at school
    running around at walmart
    to life just being good to me
    to betta dayz
    to betta dayz that i hope to see....
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Betta Dayz is off the hook. :bomb: It is a wild memorie ride thru everything good!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop here poet !
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creative layout to a very nice piece.
    Thanks for sharing..
     
  5. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rIGHT, rIGHT... SUMMER TIME DOES MEAN COOKOUTS.. AND FAMILY ARGUEMENTS, CAUSE ONE BAD AZS CHILD HIT YOUR OTHER BAD AZS CHILD.. LOL.. I FELL YOU ON THEM BETTER DAYS.. THE BROKE DAYS.. BUT YOU FORGOT THE ..

    t.V DAYS...
    THE DAYS WHEN YOU GET UP,
    BUT STAY IN BED,
    LAY AROUND,
    W/ YA NAPPY HEAD,
    HUMID OUTSIDE,
    SO YOU SLEEP ALL DAY,
    WATCHIN RERUNS,
    OF "LAMONT AND FRED"

    NICE SCRIBE..
     
  6. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Betta Dayz

    Very nice write.
     
  7. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow

    i was feeling this scribe. keep it up and much power to BETTER DAYZ!!!!!!
     
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