Black Poetry : To be without thee

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nita, Mar 5, 2001.

  1. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't explain how I'm feeling
    I don't know what to do
    I know my heart feels empty
    Because it's missing you

    I try to smell the roses
    But they just don't smell the same
    Oh what I would give,
    Just to call out your name

    The stars aren't so pretty
    The sun is not so bright
    I'm seeing total darkness
    Even when there is light

    I need to have you near me
    Closer to my heart
    Without you in my life,
    My whole world falls apart

    I need you here,
    Right now,
    With me,
    That's what I see
    My heart can't take it,not no more
    To be without thee
    :love:
     
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    Absent from You

    Miles away from you
    not sure of what to do
    Longing for your tender kiss
    And those passionate words that I miss
    Feelings that pull at the strings of my heart
    Pulls even stronger when we are apart.
    How I long to hold you in my arms
    And keep you safe from all harm
    May I make love to you with but a single kiss?
    Will you follow me into Love’s abyss?
    May I have this dance of the love?
    As we move to the music that comes from above
    In an unbreakable embrace dancing on cloud nine
    Lips joined together souls intertwined

    :love:
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Nita ... beautiful peace
    Bishop ... beautiful peace

    :love:

    Destee
     
  4. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *jus tryin to shine*
     
  5. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Again 2 good flows!!!
    bring it on!!!!
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I try my best

    Thankz brutha Turtle
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful....just like you. That was cool.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the feeling one has when they are without the one they love. Liked the way you posed this.
     
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    wow..this so so deep and the feeling flowing from your scribe is very nice..Bishop add on wow...nice one sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    inner soul of yours

    Sis I wanted to bring this one back because I loved it alot it shows one reason you are the newest CHAT MOD! :shades:
     
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