Quiet Poetry Lounge : To Be Soothe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, May 7, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish to bathe
    in the sun rays
    and towel my soul
    with the clouds
    to stare at the
    night light of the stars
    the beam of the moon
    my blanket
     
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    oooooh! Sista blue!
    That is absolutely
    breathtaking!
    I feel ya!
    What a beautiful
    picture you've
    captured here!
    Loving it!
     
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    WOW YOU TOLD A STORY WITH 20 words, you got skillz hun and IM feeling this piece
     
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    how sweet da feeling was
    as i laid in the vision
    and it was awesome
    indeed u laid it out
     
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    Sounds like you want to be taken in by all the beauty of nature. What a wonderful thought, very nicely done.
     
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    hi :wave:PurpleMoons my sister you are so sweet ,,,thank you sis for the love:heart:
    hi :wave:THEONE..ah..that is so kind of you..thank you for the love:heart:
    hi:wave:$$RICH$$ for stepping into the vision thank you brother :heart:
    hi:wave:watzinaname yes feeling one with the elements thank you sis:heart:
     
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    Oh I loved this piece it did soothe me:eek:hmy:
    much love to ya flow on:wink:
     
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    oooo la la!!!!!

    this is amazing, Blue. wow!
     
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    Hi :wave: SensualReality i'm so happy it soothe you dear sister :) thank you so much for the love:heart:

    Hi :wave: gempis..:) oh dear sister you are so kind...thank you so much for the love:heart:
     
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    Hmmmmmm I bathe myself in the
    blue depths of the daytime sky,
    allowing my soul to be dried by the
    westward breeze from mars.
    I wrap myself in my robe of sunshine
    and brush my hair with the tails of comets....
    This piece was simple but it said so much! I love it Blue, I love it.
     
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