Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bigdrizzle, Aug 15, 2005.
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Umm wow...I'm not sure if this is literal or if this is actual what you are sayin to HIm...or if this is representing someone else or somethin else in your life. I hope it is representing something else tho, cause your words are just too sad. If you draw nigh to HIM, He'll draw nigh to you. Thanks for sharing poet.
well done and deeply said unto thee
I can't really respond any better than Chastity. God is that rare kind of friend that will never let you go, even when you feel like releasing him. Your words were painfully raw brotha.
This was deep and that's abotu all I can say dbout this one. Flow on
Thanx for even taking the time to read this...I would explain my thoughts behind this but it probably best to be left unsaid. Thanx!
YO YOU DON'T KNOW ME BUT I DON'T CHURCHES AND BIBLES BUT THERE IS A HIGHER POWER, AND GOD IS IN YOU YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND IT, PEOPLE ALWAYS REFER TO GOD AS UP THERE OUT THERE BUT HIS RIGHT HERE IN YOU MAN, YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND THE POWER, AND DISPLICINE, BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY CHANGED YOUR SURROUNDING AND YOUR WAY OF THINKING, BECAUSE NOT EVERYBODY CAN BE A BILLIONAIRE SO IN OTHER WORDS DON'T WORRY ABOUT WHAT YOU DON'T HAVE JUST BE THANKFUL FOR WHAT YOU DO HAVE BECAUSE
IT COULD BE WORSE THAN IT IS TRUST ME ON THAT I KNOW FIRST HAND
PEACE BE WITH YOU POET FOR REAL
Thanx for reading my words...Spread Love, its the Brooklyn way! Peace
Wow, I really don't know what to say about this piece. Don't get me wrong I think its hot, but don't ever give up on G-d. Cause he has not given up on you. But then it could be a metaphore for something else.
You gotta a deep voice. But I agree with the member who said don't give up God, because he doesn't give up on us. Keep ya heart up and keep stunting that mad flow!
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