Black Poetry : to be continued

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Nov 28, 2006.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love doesnt wait for a phone call
    or a conversation.
    it controls all emotional elevation.
    invisble connections between family and friends.
    love waits for no one in the end.
    its mysterious.
    its unimaginable.
    no words can fully capture its pressence.
    its power, its aura.. is limitless.
    but love brings fery.
    it brings confusion.
    emotions that are never imagined...
    never created until then.
    it brings voids to fill... that only that love can.
    it opens doors for excuses, decisions, and new creations.
    its a dream of its own...
    and in it one can sleep to reality
    .. or realize their prize.
    love is ...
    the color
    red, blue and black
    ...at the same time.
    makes you happy and sad...at the same time
    ... its wonderful thing..
    but can be a horrible thing
    when dreams are not fullfilled....
    so it must be a unity thing.
    a collaborational effort.
    an aggreement.
    its going to be rocky at times...
    but the connection must always be smooth.
    mash potato smooth.
    love is...
    to be continued
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daroc:
    This scribe is so on point. Love is all those things
    and then some. The beauty and the beast of love.
    I am feeling this piece more that I could ever
    put into words. Very nice, very nice indeed.

    Much Luv
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Love is....
    To be continued


    Beautiful rendition of what love is.
    Makes one wonder how many other thangs
    are laced in love.

    Loved the drop, Poet!:luvv:
     
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    Hi daroc
    Love waits for no one, and it can come like a spring breeze
    from the winter wind.It is indeed a mystery, how it take
    a hold of our hearts, and its always so wonderful to feel it.

    *smiling* very cool
    how you made the reader view your drop
    from the right to the left... lol

    Peace & Love
     
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