Black Poetry : To Be Changes...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seasons change
    People change…
    Nothing can never be
    the same..
    as the change of seasons…
    never the same…
    so when you say go back as it
    was…I don’t understand…
    we where to grow closer not
    apart
    but it is here…
    I still love you but I can’t
    compromise no
    More…..for now I need
    to grow…without you
    coz I cant grow with you….
    You wont allow it….
    So what am I to do…
    No matter how much I talk with you
    You talk at me….
    Nothing can never be clear…
    Tired of fightin and fussin
    About nothing…cant forget the
    harsh words
    you used
    Towards me about me
    You killed my soul
    And I allowed you to take my joy
    NOW
    Its time for me to take control
    Of who I am and who I am to be…
    And I cant do it with you…

    still workin on this one....
    but this is a start of it...:toast:
     
  2. Cindy

    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, just one more thing... an old cliche but so true...
    'You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make them drink'
    He be sitting at the buffet table, but he's blind... so he will starve.
    :heart:
    Don't ya just want to punt their *** across the room sometimes!
    :laugh:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy...in time we grow....always a happy ending....lovin thyself
    is the key....
    punt their *** across the room i may kill them...so i walk away
    with gainin my pride and self being back.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i too been on this ride and it was str8 & narrow
    bumpy and smooth but i knew i had to keep moving forward
    the path of lights is in front all we have to do is walk into it
    ya headed right for it keep moving .....
    i like dis reality of pain and how one can make u better
    tyte scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto...so true...and alot of sisters dont know the self love in them selves yet...thanks for the read....
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...sorry as a man of true love within and above you had to go though such...but the out come just makes you stronger....thanks for the read..now lets finish growin...
     
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    like others, I have been here too

    maybe an ending.....


    so I'm walking away
    gonna re-plant my soul
    throw to the wind
    all the pain that I hold
    stand in the light
    til I get strong again
    and see myself bloom
    yes, I will win
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seasons change
    People change…
    Nothing can never be
    the same..
    as the change of seasons…
    never the same…
    so when you say go back as it
    was…I don’t understand…
    we where to grow closer not
    apart
    but it is here…
    I still love you but I can’t
    compromise no
    More…..for now I need
    to grow…without you
    coz I cant grow with you….
    You wont allow it….
    So what am I to do…
    No matter how much I talk with you
    You talk at me….
    Nothing can never be clear…
    Tired of fightin and fussin
    About nothing…cant forget the
    harsh words
    you used
    Towards me about me
    You killed my soul
    And I allowed you to take my joy
    NOW
    Its time for me to take control
    Of who I am and who I am to be…
    And I cant do it with you…
    *****


    so I'm walking away
    gonna re-plant my soul
    throw to the wind
    all the pain that I hold
    stand in the light
    til I get strong again
    and see myself bloom
    yes, I win
    ***
    thanks girl i like....
    dig dat...this is what friends are for
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I came to this fork in the road once, he decided that he
    wanted to come along and truly made a effort to grow
    and evolve with me........I was happy for that, he didn't as
    Cindy was saying just sit there and die

    but it was a difficult journey, it seemed at that time my eyes
    were wide open and his were closed with contentment
    I loved the way you wrote this, so realistic to long term relationships, nice scribe
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage...thank you for the read...and your words
     
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