Black Poetry : To Bad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Apr 12, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think of you every single day,
    your smile, your eyes, your
    beautiful face...Most of all I
    think about what you got
    inside...I never met someone
    so loving and caring...You
    opened your heart to me and
    gave me all your love without
    any hesitation...You showed me
    what true love is all about...
    You truly are my soul mate,
    my other part...You love me
    like I thought no one could,
    and the best part is you don't
    only tell me you make it understood...
    If I could I'd spend every hour, minute,
    and second of my life with you and
    only you...I love you so much I'll
    do anything for you, I'd give you
    the world, but even thats not
    good enough for you...You are
    more beautiful than anything I've
    ever known, or ever seen.........
    To bad this is all a dream...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All a dream? Perhaps it will become a reality. This was sweetly penned.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreams come true believe
    love the flava of ya pen
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this poem really.A dream?hmm keep dreamin it'll happen...trust me :tongue:
     
  5. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks and I will keep dreaming cuz my dream is almost complete hopefully it will fully come true