Black Poetry : To Awaken

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hurry to awaken
    Just to see your face
    Just to speak to you again
    Holding your embrace

    I will speak to you in deep emotional terms
    New thoughts as we begin our day
    Unlike before
    In every word
    New things I say
    Are things you have never heard?

    Right now
    I am in love
    It’s been a while for me
    I know everyday
    I am alive
    More than I was yesterday

    Expressing myself
    Allow me this
    Unfolding myself in your eyes
    Wrap me up in your loving smile
    As I express what I feel inside

    Don’t be afraid to love me back
    Don’t you want me?
    Like I want you
    Complete and deeply

    You are so beautiful
    Words you say
    Your movements fascinate
    I can’t but love how you
    Give back to me and make me resonate

    I am someone unlike the other
    Not a simplistic brother
    Meeting challenges like no other
    Never turning my back
    Far from one-dimensional

    I will never give false or misleading appearance
    I will never conceal the truth
    I will not be troublesome
    Burdening you down
    Placing extra weight on your breast

    I live up to my word
    With a driving force
    That keeps me awake... until I fulfill
    My every promise
    My hopes and dreams
    The things I said I will.​
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a great AWAKENING to have and feel, This is a great ...a heartwarming piece poet :toast:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister :spinstar:queentswana:spinstar:
     
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    Wow.

    All I know is, it's a blessing to "awake" to the presence of love like this!

    I so enjoyed witnessing how love colors your world. Your palette is glorious and the stoke of your "brush" upon the canvas is awesome!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes me contemplate. Just in time when something was on my mind. Nice flow Brother ....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    simply beautifully laid ....
     
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