Black Poetry : To anyone who might approach

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Aug 26, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetic mastery shown.
    My supremacy of expression known
    To the reader, through my poems.
    I control flows icier than artic cold,
    Hotter than a nuclear powered stove.
    I'm a heavy hitter but I'm light on my toes.
    Extremely gifted, I've been told.
    If something's tight, you know I'm liable.
    Those who know me agree that I'm lyrically homicidal.
    Ruin your self esteem like this was American idol.
    I have a soul too complex for clarification
    I possess talent beyond explanation.
    If congress were to pass new legislation
    Segregating the raw from the lame
    You and I could not exist in the same
    Category, I'm destined for glory.
    You aren't in the same territory
    That I inhabit lyrically.
    That's why I can't take you seriously.
    Let go and let god- just live peacefully.
    Here's a considerate suggestion- don't **** with me.

    I bust through mental barricades,
    Rhythm and rhyme driving you insane,
    Line after line invades your brain.
    This isn't a game, its devastation and no less.
    This will leave you a hot mess,
    With a permanent inferiority complex,
    Asking me to confess and tell why I'm the most excellent.
    I'll tell you that my mind and soul unite and shine in this.
    My pen and paper have sex and born is poetic text,
    Filled with words that lock and mesh
    And mix to be no less
    Than flawless, simply the best.
    And so I challenge the best of the rest.
    I invite any and all to test me,
    If they think they can compete
    With the inexhaustible poet, known as-
    Iwannabe :weights:


    Go-Go-Go-Go-
    www.poetrypoem.com/iwannabe
     
  2. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go! Excellent write. :dance1:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely said one whom take it to great heights
    a poet of lyrics
     
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