Black Poetry : Titled:"HER"

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "HER"

    The smell, touch, and feel of her causes me to LONG and CRAVE, and although non-reluctantly brilliantly, I become HER slave.


    The thinking of thoughts while having thoughts of thinking, made me forget to remember the things about HER that are unforgettable....HER silhouette and that THING she does to me that makes me oh so MENTALLY wet!!

    Presently present in my forward frontal lobe are IMAGES of her BURNED and ETCHED as if caught in a forest fire and that bear says to me, "ONLY YOU", can prevent the heat of this desire.

    Silly and unrequited, but nonetheless excited, by the emotions thought DEAD and hidden away...I turn and say to HER...POUR out on ME all those sweet things YOU possess and become my stormy rainy day!!

    Incredible and FORMIDIBLE are the exsisting, non exsisting remnants of a dynasty built FOR and by HER through acts of kindness and passion.

    One constant thought remains DEEPLY embedded in my mind, heart, body, and soul....There shall NEVER be another unintentional intentional SOUL kiss as the one administered by....

    HER.
    (Dedicated from ORACLE to SAGE) :heart:
     
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    I envy you for finding such passion- Beautiful expression of love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was heart felt and the passion u pose is not in vain
    tyte scribe
     
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    Beautiful expression of love and passion, you are to be envied for finding such. I'm new here but I'll look for more of you.
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is but a blessing the well that flows from within me.

    Thank all of you for the droplets of sweet confirmation.

    Ya'll just don't know.
     
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    WOW!...........The deep flow of passion and love....never gets old.

    This is truly a masterpiece written by the hands of a true poet!
    I think 1poet said it well when he said, it is to be envied...

    Thank you for blessing us with this refreshing piece of poetic beauty!

    Oh! and by the way..................Merci pour la d├ędicace!
     
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    WOOH! THAT MAKES ME HOT... I'M NOT SURE IF I WANT SOMEONE LIKE U OR SOMEONE LIKE "HER" MORE. SHE SEEMS UNBELIEVABLY GREAT AND U NOTICE ALL THE MINOR BUT BIG THINGS TO "HER''. MAN... I WANT SOMEONE LIKE BOTH ALL YALL.. TYTE FLOW...
     
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    this really tight...
    good one...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    well dam.n..............
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How do most of you get your inspiration??

    Any suggestions?
     
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