Black Poetry : Title Flowing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 28, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow is from the first Twelve post. This has been done once before. I can't recall who did the flow, but I enjoyed reading it. Maybe the Family can help me in placing a name of the poet to the original flow. I really liked the way my fellow poet did it last time and thought it would be nice to see what I could come up with.

    Magnetic Lover, pull me closer to you. Give Love or Leave, me be. I just want to be a part of thee. Dedicated, love comes from me you see. In My Room, we can get it on. Stages of Sexual Mood, things are going strong. Loving You, to boundaries unknown. Society Deframed, because this love is strong. Soul Eyes, staring up at me. Finding Africa, in the love made between you and me. We reached the home land can’t you see. Short Keystroke, from my piano of love. Sweating working hard to get this done. The End, I know we have to get some sleep. Reality Check, because if I’m late for work again. I’ll be on the unemployment heap.
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Poets

    $$RICH$$ :teach:er :teach:er
    Destee :heart: :heart:
    caramelpython :cool: :teach:er
    FINDLOVEINME :new: :spinstar:
    ASHANTA :spinstar: :angel1:
    1poetsought :spinstar: :teach:er
    PropheticNsyght :spinstar: :spinstar:
    MADDRAPPER :new: :teach:er

    Thank You. To these Poets. I used your titles to flow with the poem.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A BIG "UP", HODEE...

    HEIDI, HEIDI, HEIDI, HO!!!
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight. very very tight....way to use that imagination...keep flowin poet keep flowin'!!!
     
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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    Hodee...this was sooooooo Awesome!

    I loved it...You definitely have skillz!

    Wonderful!

    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    Nice job Hodee, very creatively done.
     
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    Wow!!! Very unique indeed!

    I love the creativity in this piece!

    Wonderful job Brother Hodee!!!!!
     
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    Creativity to the max. That was wonderful Hodee.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    hey now!!!! this was tight...creative poet do ya thang!!!!
     
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