Black Poetry : Tis Black Soul

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 19, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    Through tis woman lay a feeling
    not glue'd yet emotional willing

    Through her hands lay a story
    not so new nor about glory

    Through her eyez speaking of
    rage and pain on a broken heart

    Inside her slumber dreams dewell
    awaken in life is a cast of spells

    Her feet was bare curl and sore
    each step of hurt was to da core

    She was da victim of her creed
    tis made her soul truely bleed

    Tis black soul was a root of hope
    arms of cradle yet remote

    I saw her every pain and emotion
    when her eyes spoke of rage
    trying to release self from this cage

    Now all i see is an empty shell
    where her soul once dewell

    All i hear is da cry
    asking in prayer father why
    as tis woman took waves to fly
    looking back on life sayin bye !

     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 24, 2004
    Messages:
    7,007
    Likes Received:
    160
    Occupation:
    day care provider (own business)
    Location:
    Brick City
    Ratings:
    +161
    Very touching, It rode through my soul...deep piece poet!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    Thank u , as i look inside her story of rage and pain she was delt
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    There are times when we're faced with situations that we try to deal with but the weight...the weight of it all just gets too heavy. Most know that God can help bear the load, but sometimes we don't see or feel that help is there, and hope turns to despair.
    I felt the sorrow in this piece, I surely did.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    so on point watz thankz for feeling tis woman pain
     
Loading...