Black Poetry : tired of the mack

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Jan 3, 2011.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cuz it's you
    I can't stop
    can't rewind
    can't change my mind
    even though you done me
    a thousand times
    racked my brain
    whined and complained
    all the while
    you call my name
    CHICA, to wit
    I f*#&$(*#&$ respond
    YES,
    and then, i feel blessed?
    you reached out to me
    can't you see
    your killing me
    and not softly
    there aint no rhyme in that
    no words to jack
    so i stop crying and caring and loving and starin
    and you come back?
    yo, g, i am straight tired of your mack
     
  2. skuderjaymes

    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    nice. like the rhythm.


    peace.
     
  3. dashadespeaks

    dashadespeaks New Member MEMBER

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    I Dig it!

    Very Kool rhythm!
     
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