Black Poetry : TIRED OF 2DAY!

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every day it's hard to see,
    why i live here.
    why i gotta do the things,
    that were made for me to do from the beginning.
    and all the times i'm questioned,
    when i don't understand it.
    those days are the days,
    when i want to say-what i can't.
    and i hate that bcuz,
    i'm forced to be someone,
    that i'm not.
    and even though it may seem appropriate for the moment,
    it isn't necessarily me.
    and that's why the smallest things,
    cause me to act the way i do.
    but every day is different,
    and there may be a day when i know why i live here.
    and why i have to do the things i do,
    bcuz it's a different day.
    and i'm hoping that that day,
    will arrive soon.
    cuz if i continue living today,
    i won't live to see tomorrow.
    and that's the day,
    i hope IS the day..............(sigh)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply expressed scribe of day to day living
    but the faith of ya beings is grand keep ya
    head up and living to will take u into tomorrow
    feel ya
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we have to say a prayer to make it to the next minute, and say another one to make it to the next hour. Feelin this, really, keep writing.
     
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    Very touching piece...
    we've all been here but
    always remember...
    Every day is a new day...
     
  5. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the words of wisdom. really appreciate em. love ya'll :heart:
     
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