Black Poetry : TIP/TOE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My heart has tip toe into your gentle slope
    for it is warm, I've beded in your walk
    my mind has venture into da moment
    of ya movement to rest upon ya valley
    da undulations of slow turning my eyez
    close unto ya slumber for u sleep
    now sleep da crimson petal
    nor wave da cypress in self palace
    I walk tip toe nor wink in da font;
    my fire fly awaken, waken wit me !

    Behold me, drop da milkwhite peacock
    like da morning ghost to glimmer onto me
    every step is laced wit my fire of love
    a shinning furrow dat has desires i leaves
    upon da face and lipest of my spool kiss
    fold thyself my dearest in ya sweetness
    and slip into my blosom so i may tip toe
    into your dayz wit tenderness
    on side my darkest times i found thee
    inside da core of my shadow an sparkle

    For silently i've been so long ago age past
    watchin you through da depth of these cries
    my soul bare light when i be tippin into you
    I now carry you ova da waters of deep
    when da windz sing agreeably love child
    from tis day forward you shall not walk alone
    my heart will be your shelter
    for thou arms will be your home of comfort
    da essence of your stay will be crystalize
    treasury of love is da tip toe of my walk

    LET ME IN !?


    :heart::em4500::heart:
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    maybe you have to knock harder?

    :?:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed like a gentle breeze poet.
     
  4. Khasm13

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    i was about to say thru the tulips but this was way better...lol
    you came thru teddy pendergrass style on this joint....nice!

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so'ja i've been bangin and bangin ....maybe nobody home !...lol

    Thank you watz it's like a wind song , singing in da rain !

    bruh Khasm big thankz your words means a lot maybe some lilly's will do !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dont listen to brotha soja rich smh

    you come in there bangin like the police you liable to get stabbed shoo lolll or tasered or somethin lol

    your approach was just fine :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol @ triniti.......well i'll be sho to holla (it's Me )
     
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    very sweet and endearing write.
     
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    Hey sister sweet apple*pie thankz been a while no see nice to feel ya pen again ...