Black Poetry : Tip to Toe

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  1. Shennia b

    Shennia b New Member MEMBER

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    Tip tp Toe

    I saw him, this African King
    He was atching me
    This chocolate brother dipped in cinnamon
    With a pinch of vanilla
    And kissed by the sun
    Had captured my gaze
    I wanted to stay in this place
    A place of never-ending epiphanies
    His place of ecstasy.

    I saw him...I saw him from tip to toe
    This... this Innocent naked natrural beauty
    Of an African man
    Who was chiseled beyond my wildest Imagination
    My life form was instantaneously filled with temptation

    I saw passed his natural rare finest
    I lo :eek:hmy: nged for his touch, I desired to be his lioness
    You don't understand me when I say I saw the seat of his soul
    Our eyes and spirits danced to a Nubian Ethiopian beat of long ago

    After the dance I stepped back and looked away
    He smiled and said, "Have a nice day."
    ****, that was the best sex I've ever had from tip to toe
    And I didn't have to remove any of my clothes.
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow for a second I thought it was me in that place ;) ...sounds like to me it was :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: 's going off...I think we all been or would like to go there :puke:
    welcome abroad the soul train.
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -sexy-
    i can dig it...

    one,
    /antar
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was like :jawdrop: i can't even explain it pass that..........beautiful :hot:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now you were certainly into that brother. I liked this flow, welcome to destee!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee...
    i likes this flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaa u laid dis one out to perfection