Black Poetry : tip of my tongue

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, May 2, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i want to lick your
    klit
    feel it
    softly between my
    lips
    and
    hummmmm
    while delicate juices
    ruuuuun
    i see it bounce on
    the tip of my tongue
    as i take hold
    of
    labia folds
    and
    kiss them deeply
    mouth to mouth
    using oral fascination
    to reach a destination
    centered soft circle
    then
    enter moistened delight
    with
    tickling talent
    orchestrating a whinesong
    as engorged passion
    licks back
    then rise
    to your
    erection
    just then encircle
    to
    give you head
    like
    stiff legs tremble
    cause
    you're remembering this road
    but detour signs pass
    as your *** floats up
    throat chokes up
    and i
    swirl your hip melody
    with bucking backbeats
    sweet eruptions
    from deep within
    you
    wash away all
    preconceived notions
    as i swim in an ocean
    of yes...yes...oh ****...*****...MEOW!!!
    as i hold
    your klit
    still until
    the last earthquake subsides
    riding away
    with
    the tide
    mmm...baby
    just
    lay back
    and
    close your eyes
    cause
    that was just
    the first one
    so
    take a deep
    breath
    and
    prepare to
    continue to
    let your love run
    across the tip of my tongue...
     
  2. Destee

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    Inhale ~ Exhale ~ Inhale ~ Exhale

    Okay ... Whew ... I'm Ready!!!

    :lol:

    This is tooooooooo Hottttt !!!! :hot:

    Yall up in here talk'n like this??? Oh My GoooooNessss !!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...thanx des, glad you liked. sometimes a brotha has to get loose...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got that **** sounding so good, I’m on the phone making a booty call right now.
    Gota get it.
    She on the other line talking bout “what’s wrong” nuttin baby I just read some ****, got me thing bout it.
    Dis here was hot poet
     
  5. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: Is it warm in here or is it just me? :hot:

    good googly goo... ****! ... jus' ****.

    :heart: n' this one right here, poet.
     
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    Derick Derrick Derrick.
    You accomplished just what you set out to do with this poem, my dear brother. Got a sistah seeing stars...weak kneed, cross-eyed ,blushing, flushing, and tingling in all the right places.
    Nuff said.
    Peace and blessings.
     
  7. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay, i was takin it all in stride till you said

    " whinesong" - that just made it too real.

    Vivid, bruh - very vivid.


    ( in case any ladies see this,
    Hypnotize is waiting til marriage
    b-4 he regularly goes down under -- it's
    a taste i haven't acquired yet ---- yet )
     
  8. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Incredibly effective,a cold shower is calling...
     
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    :hot: ****!!!!!!



    You gon have a sistah backsliding!!! :eek:
     
  10. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    destee - i've got oxygen if you need it!...lol

    shaz - call her and do yo thang, tell her derrick jay sent ya...lol!

    ms B - gettin a little warm for ya?...lol

    deepgrrrl - well, you already know ma...lol

    hypnotize - glad to knock you off track brotha and you doing the right thang, take yo time...

    lahana mysteria - cold showers don't even begin to help...lol!

    Aminata (beautiful name) - watch out fo dat slip and backslide now...lol!

    thanks for the reads fam...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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