Black Poetry : tiny thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by robboy2003, Jan 27, 2007.

  1. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I lie here still,because you are trying to take my will,and if i was bigger i would probably try to kill.

    I was born to you,but you act like i'm nothing and why do you front when shes here like i'm really something.

    I can't help that i sometimes cry and why do you do these horrible things to me why oh father why? Even though you do these things to me,i still love you by and by,but please stop abusing me or i will die.

    Then you won't see the great person, that i could become. I could be a star athlete and mention you whenever my team won.

    I love my mom right now,because she carried me,but it does not mean i love you any less all i need is for my father to step up and be his best.

    I still want to believe in you,but please dear dad get help before you do the things that alcohol and drugs make you do.

    I am just a babe,but your life as well as mine may be the life you safe.

    I love when there probably isn't a reason a childs love is forever and all seasons.

    Nurture and guide me. I'll always try and make you proud you'll see. I'd like to see sunshine instead of a threating cloud!

    Teach me to be so maybe my young ones can see. I do more than lie here looking smug be nice to me and receive all my precious love.

    Copyrighted 2007 Levance robbboy 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh i feel all the purity of this warmth and love here bruh !!!!
    u really laid it out this time....................................................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A child sees hope where we as adults don't. So innocent and deserving of that love. I felt this poet.
     
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    im feeling your tiny thoughts love flo on poet.
     
  5. robboy2003

    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you watzinaname, nevar, $$RICH$$ Our love should be unconditional with these young babies.

    Sadly, we have too many little brains shaken from rough handling,and abuse.

    Thanks for the love on this Peace, luv, and Harmony!
     
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