Black Poetry : Timed Ponderings

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tick tock, tick tock,
    Time doesn't stand still
    Time waits for no one
    even if you think it will
    Linear time... moving forward
    learn from the past
    but don't live in it
    cause the past, don't last

    Time doesn't fly even when you
    really are having fun
    Just seems like it went by quickly
    when all the gallivanting is done
    If you knew you were
    having the time of your life,
    exactly when it was occuring,
    would you revel in it, or allow strife
    to wash away some of that joy?
    Can pessimism always destroy?

    In other dimensions, it is possible
    to move through time and space
    Using energies to transport to a forgotten
    past, a hopeful future, an out of body place
    Sometimes I wish I could linger in that ecstatic
    moment, experience that warmth, that care
    embrace that love for a bit longer, but that moment
    is temporary, for I live in this dimension, not...there

    As I look at the clock
    It still says
    Tick tock, tick tock,
    Time doesn't stand still
    Time waits for no one
    even if you think it will
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    and when you realize local cosmic time

    is 25 earth years = 1 cosmic DAY

    that's right 1 cosmic DAY

    you realize time of this life is even shorter than you even realize

    cherish each moment

    you piece speaks of the patience one needs to recognize

    temporary is the moment ~~~~~~~~~~~~>

    that just passed by

    lol

    great piece Watz
     
  3. Desert Storm

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    I definately agree
    Time keeps on ticking
    And things will change without you even if you don't change and time waits for no body and has it own way

    For sure.

    Deep scribe. Loved it

    DS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed time to keep tickin on moving upward
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, So'ja, it is later then we all think it is. Thank you poet.
    Time moves on regardless, so true, thank you Desert Storm.
    Thank you much Rich, appreciated.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    and when you chop time up into 25 intervals

    look what you get

    what do you see here?

    1900 1925 1950 1975 2000 2025



    5 cosmic days

    sometimes you can't began to comprehend

    time

    it's so elusive

    now in earth 1900-2025 is a hundred and twenty-five years a long time right?


    NOT

    lol

    just for us little ole' earthlings it is
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, So'ja the concept of time is definitely relative, it's in how we perceive it. Thank you again brotha.
     
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