Quiet Poetry Lounge : Time...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by plainrhythm, Nov 10, 2004.

  1. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not even a clock can race the spaces of time's
    variations where the system is attacked
    by the demons of everlasting...

    torture is not, simplicity is questioned when being
    difficult is the same key and they bow
    to the kings of today's hurt
    and sorrow and the real kings of history
    have been arrested for...

    27 years of pure beauty as the sun sets
    and rises but each day is maintained by
    the horisons of color for those who
    wish to see but don't and those
    who wish to feel but won't breathe...

    in and out respiration caused by the systems
    in our body unlike the systems in our world we
    govern ourselves scratch that they
    say we do and our time is...

    evaluated by the measurements not rulers
    but freakometers you can't write poetry
    if you don't know erotic but we
    the kings of poetry have broken those
    barriers with our undying passion of
    finding ourselves...

    in the middle of our destinies and as i was writing this
    your time was not wasted but uselessly spent
    because the essence of time
    is valuable to those who aren't waiting for
    redemption so maybe i'm not maybe i am
    only time...

    will tell...
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See poet...this is what I'm talking bout
    "Take me on a journey of words"...
    that make me see the world in colors
    that don't exist...and make me question
    if my perception of what is real...is or isn't...
    Poetry...that makes me stop...
    and "Think"...
    Makes me re-evaluate the state of spoken word...
    and why sometimes we don't respect it as
    we should...
    but when I read poets like you...
    I know there is hope...

    As I've said before...
    Poetry was looking for you...
    and a "True Scribe" has been found...

    Loving your work writer...
    Encore...
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so awesome and well written it just hoovers deep in souls
    a very lovely piece of art work here.......
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    posed this well..i enjoyed this read and this is POETRY
    flow head on nice work poet
     
  5. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you family, only a family with such kindness as this can drive a poet to write until their hands are sore! much love to all of you and thank you again!
    :ilu:
     
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    :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: Very Heavey peice, Im with the fam, this sends you on a poetic ride.
    Great post poet, Poetry is you!
     
  7. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dunno about poetry being me... but thank you nonetheless!
    your support is amazing!
    :juggle:
     
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    HI plainrhythm..
    I like elegance nature of your flow
    teaching in a devine way
    the culture with a smooht vibe
    wonderful feel:)


    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you bluewater, you've all been nothing but a great family, thank you again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome from within