Black Poetry : Time...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PloeMorphic, Nov 29, 2003.

  1. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless,
    As I gaze at the sacredness and tranquility in the constellation above
    Yes, Ramada—month of cleansing, spiritual upliftment, time to remember and feel the gastric hyperactivities that took place in those who starved involuntarily
    Time to be one with the creator
    Bless,
    As I stood still to wash every fiber of negativity that may have blushed my temple today
    But concurrently my thoughts were interrupted in order to participate in this immaculate scene
    Thoughts like do not pass go, do not collect $200
    Yes this is some mentalopoly eroding and the devine ocular capacities in my third eye
    No cast, no cuts, no scripts, no imaging, just us
    Us encased in this picture so deep that seconds envied the intended minute
    Bless,
    As I still reminisce this love Jones causing abdominal groans
    Cause I still seek inner stability with my third Mecca
    Have you seen him?
    I am still so connected because he completes me
    I want to be that she that shared the same dominator
    I mean thoughts of us traveling and stimulating our third eye
    Thoughts of him eroding the curvature of my spine
    Thoughts of our strong personality uniting and birthing energies beyond cyber space cadets
    Bless,
    As I recall thoughts of a love so perplexed that Shakespeare didn’t attempt to copyright because his pen will turn gangrene
    It was not meant to be rewritten but only stored in the mental
    Bless,
    Cause I’m in love with this melanin man
    As I envision us completing our pending ankh
    I’ll be that she struggling with you to the end
    I’ll be that she promoting growth and existence of vital signs in my divine womb for our future seeds
    I’ll be that she to share similar rem cycles with you
    Cycles after cycles--- seconds will always envy the intended minute, minutes will become hours
    Bless,
    As I’ll be that she that perpetuate around sankofa
    I am that she truly in love with you
    My love for you has always be real
    It was never a bad timing
    So love ride with me
    Time…
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed the moving, timeless, weightlessness of this great work. Scribe On!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u post a awesome flow here wooooweeeee!
    flow on poet
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really enjoyed the flow...
     
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    ahh enchantment by the poem you have compose very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are that she
    that massages the mental,
    that embraces the spiritual,
    that seduces with words of wisdom,
    whose words are supplemental, food 4 thought.

    Keep doing your thing sister, I'm loving it.
     
  7. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless,
    Thanks everyone for the love with this piece. It was real personal. But needed to be written down.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I recall thoughts of a love so perplexed that Shakespeare didn’t attempt to copyright because his pen will turn gangrene
    Yes...
    This poem was exquisitely crafted. Blew me away.
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace...

    This was way on point...keep droppin da science.