Black Poetry : Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Oct 15, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No matter where you go
    I'm never here waiting for you
    Because you always take my heart with you
    Although time and distance seperate us
    I've never felt closer to anyone else
    It hurts when were apart
    But it only makes it that much better when were together
    I know being apart is hard for us both
    And I know you think you're keeping me from being with someone else
    But I don't want you to feel like that
    Cause I'm not looking anymore
    I'm here because I love you
    And because I want to be
    But if we can get through this it can only get better
    When I picture the rest of my life
    I see you in it
    So I'm not willing to give us up without a fight
    We both jumped into this without a thought
    And now it's like were drowing in this ocean of love
    I, for one, don't wanna be saved
    It's just a matter of time before things get better
    Maybe it's good that we had these bad times
    Cause it will just make us cherish the times we have ahead of us even more
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the concept behind this, not to mention the flow. great scribe.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like this nice girl
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Although time and distance seperate us
    I've never felt closer to anyone else"

    ok I'm gon need for ya to stay outta my head LoL
    cause I KNOW all about this right here
    very
    very close to home this one was :)
     
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    No matter where you go
    I'm never here waiting for you
    Because you always take my heart with you

    no matter the distance...you're still together
    no matter the problem...the love can not be seperated

    you captured this so eloquently...
    love and it's undeniable endurance!
     
  6. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: All your words are SO greatly appreciated.
     
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    I LIKE THIS ALOT..WHOLE THING IS QOUTABLE...
    VERY NICE PIECE .....


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