Black Poetry : Time Will Tell

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont know what 2 do.
    We can never b 2gether, but we love eachother.
    We're 2 different people fightin the same da*n emotion.
    I dont know if i'll b able to handle all the commotion.
    U know i love u, even though im w/another.
    No i didnt stutter. i love u, i need u....
    I know u love me too.
    U tried 2 keep ur emotions undercover.
    But somehow they shined thru.
    U had an emotional storm,
    I guess im the one who is supposed to calm u.
    This definitely wasnt the norm.
    Cuz shorty, all u kept sayin was....
    I love u,
    I love u,
    I love u.
    I need u 2 guarantee me that id b ur girl.
    But u cant....
    Cant give me nethin definite.
    Cant give me nethin solid.
    Cant give me nethin concrete.
    So y the f**k should i creep??
    I dont have time to operate on hunches.
    I need somethin absolute, as in yes or no.
    I'm not tryna get left out in the cold n all alone.
    Give me a reason to bounce.
    Show me that ur gonna b better than what i got now.
    Make my heart skip a beat.
    R u really ready 2 b down 4 me??
    I'm not walkin out that door until u know in ur heart that u want me 4 sure.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said i hear ya !
    it's o'kay to express a little
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed reading
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..........this was real

    makin him make that commitment...that's the way u gotta bring it

    and yes time will tell...
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum.... so good and right on the spot...been in this type of relationship.... as both the receiver and giver... it hurts both ways......
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 4 all the love fam.......:) it feels good to post again. much love
     
  7. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!
    nothing like laying on the line
    great read
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    exactly what blaque said..its a powerful flow...gon ahead gurl let him know
     
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