Black Poetry : time space continnuum

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    without you

    i feel spells of faint--
    falling sickness stomach turning--
    what a happiness-less mass am I--

    without you

    the world around seems fatalist--
    in-es-cap-able
    i'm trapped like--
    tallahassee traffic @ rush hour--
    Manhattan is gridlocked all day...
    that's how my mind feels--

    without you--

    perspectives and opinions seem not as speech-worthy--
    not as important...****...nothing is as important
    nothing has importance...

    without you...

    scared afraid para-noid--on-edge jumpy--
    not myself--

    nearly terrified...

    without you--

    my life is a time space continnuum in which i wait--
    for you...
    to touch you--
    I wait.

    without you.
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amazing...

    What did I tell you about all this depth? Simply :heart:felt, poet. Exceptional... :D
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEAN....

    you got me feelin' like...

    i can't even put it into words!

    keepdoinyourthangbaby... :)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sunshyne and Maple....

    i just....i mean...






    thanx.

    wurdplai.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel that

    been there, know this, haven't thought of it in terms you stated, but now you gotz tha mental churning 4 sho!
    *meditations*
     
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