Black Poetry : Time-Release Medicine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Aug 11, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you give me that time-release action

    that
    injection that
    just stays longer
    when my yearning
    for your love-touch
    gets stronger

    when you're not here...

    oooo baybeeeee
    how you be both
    the cause and the cure?

    the dose be so deadly,
    uncut, so **** pure...

    how you be hazardous
    and healthy for me
    at the same
    time?

    how YOU MAKE ME LOSE
    yet bring MY peace of
    MIND???

    how you be prison and palace
    my jailer and liberator...
    with all the keys to
    lock it down then
    turn around and
    unlock the need
    in me?

    how you make me
    hunger/thirst/
    ache/burst
    all while you
    feedin me?

    you give me that time-release action
    complete with my deep cravings
    and ultimate satisfaction

    when you're not here


    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALYCE

    ITS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YA SOULMATE
    BRINGS EVEN WHEN HE'S NOT THERE
    U BROKE IT DOWN SO WELL
    SO U MUSING OVA HIM TONIGHT I SEE....;)
    WELL OPEN YA :heart: AND :love: HIM TO
    DA UPMOST AND SEAL IT WIT A FAT :kiss:
     
  3. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    I feel you. Nothing like a strong, fine, potent medicine man! :D

    Maggie
     
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    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such beautiful contrast
    u just be taking it there ms a

    with all the keys to
    lock it down then
    turn around and
    unlock the need
    in me?


    keep that pen moving
     
  5. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    this is poetry at its best. i loved the feel of it!
     
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    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    I C Y you're so happy allatime!

    Likeded this one!


    raheem
     
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    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see,

    you got the good stuff, sis!! So glad to see it's still going strong!

    Nice, Alyce, veeeerrrrrrrrryyyy nice. :)

    X
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl...

    [SIZE=huge]I...can...feel...
    you...on...this...one,
    let me tell you!
    There is nothing
    like the irony of
    of that type of cause
    (you know the
    cause you placed,
    so well, into verse
    on this one here)
    and
    its elixir being
    one in the same.
    Now, you know
    I'm lovin' this one! :D :D
    [/SIZE]
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    since day one...

    you've brought magic to flow of your words...speaking to the soul of the reader. THANK YOU for being you.:)
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    y'all...don't know where I'd be without my meds.


    a
     
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