Black Poetry : Time Out

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  1. illwillthakid

    illwillthakid Member MEMBER

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    Time Out

    I just wanna take a time out to tell you that I Love You

    Cause lately we've too busy puttin' on a show for everyone else
    & though I do love you
    I wanna tell you how I feel
    Cause a love like ours is strong
    & I want it to stay for real so. . .

    I just wanna take a time out to tell that . . . I Love You

    Not no puppy love, no this is more than a crush
    I'm really feelin' and I can't keep it one the hush
    & I wanna let the world know that your mines and Im yours
    & I dont need no other girl cause your the one I adore
    which is why . . .

    I just wanna take a time out to tell that . . . I Love You

    I mean I know I've said it before
    But now I feel as if Im more mature
    & when I say it Im sure
    Cause your heart is so pure
    It's somethin' I cant break
    & I dont care how long it takes
    Cause you've got the best of me
    & I just want you to see that . . .

    I just wanna take the time out to tell you that . . . I Love You

    $ I dont even wanna ryhme no more
    Cause I want you to know that Im comin' from the heart
    & Im not thinkin' with my ****
    though . . .
    Your body is nice
    Your mind is better
    & your heart is worth more than gold
    Our love is so good
    & I dont ever wanna let go
    so. . .

    Im just takin' a time out to say . . .

    I LOVE YOU :spank:
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome :wave: to the family
    this is so nice
    i just want
    to say i love you
    ahhh
    very special this flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee....:wave:
    nice flow hope to read more...
    come in share and more...:wave:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice illwill
    Welcome to Destee. Flow with the love.
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice...
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a flawless declaration of love...at it's best

    Welcome and beautiful work!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love
    very nice flow hit us wit mo and welcome :wave: :wave: