Black Poetry : Time....(my 1st poem on here)

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's something in your yesterday
    Thats keeping you from living today
    Lost loves that have died
    Lonely tears have been cried
    Hatchets that should have been buried
    But instead they've been carried
    Hurt buried deep inside
    Crushing your pride
    Your true emotions trying to hide
    The pain that lies beneath your smile
    Becoming insecure
    Although you know that's not your style
    Trying all the while
    To be someone you're not
    But what will happen when the clock doesn't tock and time stops?



    By: BlatinaPoet4u

    :spinn: ~*Be careful wut u choose to do in life becuz sum1 maybe be followin ur footsteps*~ :spinn:
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very positive and touching...I like this poem and I encourage you to keep DROPPIN EM'LIKE IT'S HOT lol :flame: :wink::wave:
     
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    welcome to destee
    please feel free to drop your poetry
    day or night...we are always here :)
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnx for the support!
     
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    Welcome to destee.com
    really nice and touching read
    i enjoyed it....
    come flow with us
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    Nice drop welcome to the family
    happy to feel your flow and hope
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    Welcome to destee! There was so much truth in your words, sometimes we keep getting in our own way. Thoughts to ponder, and so on point.
     
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    Ahhh!

    There's something in your
    yesterday that makes you
    look forward for tomorrow!

    Even through lost love and
    pain... a light of hope still
    follows!

    Keep releasing them!

    Tyte scribing!
     
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    Welcome

     
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    Man, I can't wait to see another one of your poems. This one will stick with me cuz it was sooo well written:):):) Welcome to Destee!!!
     
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