Black Poetry : Time limit love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by A007, Aug 8, 2006.

  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How did you happen into my life and settle into my heart?
    So naturally and softly that I didn't even see you coming?
    With such strength and power that I couldn't fight it off?
    Touching my soul with passion and a love that will never tire
    It never ceases to amaze me that I am blessed
    with the opportunity to know and love you
    Yet, I feel as if I can't show you how much I love you
    because I am so constricted in when, where, and what I can do
    How do I demonstrate my heart's gratitude
    every breathing moment when I have you part-time?
    I want to experience so many new things with you
    so that you can be my first over and over again
    I long to be your everything
    to wrap you with a love that never fades
    and give you a reason to smile every single day
    I wish to help you through your hard times
    share in all your joys and your love for life
    And yet I know that you will eventually let me go
    How am I supposed
    to live without you?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was on point .....
     
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    :darts: loved your flow and all the feelings and questions it brought to mind.
     
  5. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you everyone
     
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    hey this was very touching and moving. keep on with the good work.:welldone:
     
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    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was real cool poet. It flowed nicely and evoked a lot of emotions i haven't felt in awhile. Tite write
     
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    A007:
    This scribe is amazing.
    I think you jacked my thoughts,
    could you please get out of my head:)
    So feeln' this joint!!!!

    Much luv
     
  9. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ 4ever thanks
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So you thinks it funny.:)
    You wont when I'm inside your head
    jacking your thoughts. lol

    Much Luv
     
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