Black Poetry : Time in Reverse

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  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time in Reverse
    day becomes night
    night becomes day
    my body -
    it doesn't know
    the difference
    my clock -
    is dead
    wrinkled kleenex floods
    my pillow as the tears drown
    me in a papier mache pond
    the ****'s crow finds me
    wide awake
    the stirring in my soul
    does not let up
    who am i doing this for?
    time in reverse
    The bluest eye
    Freida Claudia
    my companions
    my Sacred book
    always close at hand
    Psalms Revelations
    new old new old new old
    back and forth I go
    on each page
    a secret treasure lies
    whose life am I living?
    I walk in
    TRAMP
    on heart
    I walk out
    who sees me through
    this time in reverse?
    I open my eyes
    uncage my soul
    time returned
    time guaranteed
    time eternal
    time in He
    life in me
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a powerful scribe this was flo on sahara!
     
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    Hi sahara heart
    that is so true, sometimes we all walk in confusion
    never sure about what the next page would revel
    and sometimes turning back to pages of a life
    that have blown in the wind
    much love to you
    very awesome flow

    Peace & Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u touch some key points and yes we truely in a maze tyte deep drop
    to da mental flow head and keep talking loud reaching da minds
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece caused me to think about time, how it sometimes seems to stand still yet in reality waits for no one. Much can be done and undone in time, best to use it wisely. Enjoyed your flow poet.
     
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