Black Poetry : time eternal

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it may take time
    just to understand my
    mind frame
    and place names to these
    feelings that flowed in
    once you left this life forever
    for I have yet to find the mouth
    to speak the loss
    of blood
    to convey the release
    and relief you must feel
    on the far side of forever
    far from the vain struggles
    of the mundane
    and pain of living
    when all is grief
    down to each spoonful
    and each sip of living
    down to each belabored breath
    and death was the doorway
    you passed through
    back to the cradle of creation
    a soul in God's hands
    and in your place is a room full
    of thoughts and feelings
    in time I'll slip into the space
    in hopes to begin to understand
    what I know is you were loved
    what I know is you will be loved
    loved like close kin
    love like time eternal

    02/28/03/Michael
     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte skrybe.
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can relate...nice piece.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the love, family.
    God bless ya'll!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    born to die
    love is eternal
    but we are not

    we are blips riding along in infinity

    yo great great piece poet
    strong real strong

    DSS
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DSS, man I appreciate the nod from ya!
    Much love and respect!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely posed ......I bow and honor u
    loveth da way u came
    enternal mind of memories
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx brotha Rich! Dat's when I know
    the flow is on the right track.
    appreciate the pound from ya!
    much love and respect!
     
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    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    marvelous
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Nicole! God bless!
     
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