Black Poetry : till the sun come

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    daniel davis

    "a snake in da garden"


    Till the sun come

    We gon cry
    Till the light touch a fig
    We call each other nig
    We gon play
    Music trying to get a gig
    Till the ice reflects of the cubix
    We, my people trying to figure this rubix
    Oooh, we trying to win, we do the next best thing
    We gon sell crack and flip jumbo jacks to stay in between

    We gon survive…
    I said we gon ride
    Till the sun come
    We work for the body’s decomposition
    This is fast lane
    This is intuition
    Till the sun bring nutrition

    Till the sun come

    We gon laugh
    Children still gon be bastards
    Welfare will still exist
    And it try to design a building for this
    We gon be anorexic
    To the true word
    We take the good book
    Eat and throw it back up
    Cuz we sinners
    But to me…..we winners

    Till the sun come

    They don’t feel da boy
    I’m str8 goin off pain
    Agony, defeat
    If u shiny, stop reading, I only write to cleats
    Now disregard that if u real

    Till the sun come
    Real gon recognize real
    That means u gon feel every word I spill
    Over cuz its by accident I made it thru
    To school today
    To work today
    To the store today
    We could a pumped gas and got blown away

    I’m thru man, holla at me
    2004
     
  2. ~Provakativ~

    ~Provakativ~ Active Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you think...
    :teach: tell it like it is
     
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    Holla...feeling this..wow
    Peace
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak on i hear ya love da way u brought dis down to pad
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strong piece!

    I felt the anger, agony,pain, and still hope and perserverance message in this piece.
    It was intensely riveting...But a very strong and memorable piece!

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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