Black Poetry : Til

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Oct 14, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The history of steel
    The favorite hard deminoirs
    The hottest light becomes entrapped for a
    formed outcome
    Put in deep within the well to experience the heat for withall
    While fact checking was the well or still their first.
    But needing oneanother to become
    A stolen element in history
    Neutrality can come round naturally
    To turn
    Into a debate
    For who heats the man made well to
    Always be defense of steal as to who
    Still will not Admite being stolen from the chosen few
    That inevitabily become a point @ heart.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree. Let the time come when men are forged by an alchemy which bonds a man and women. Thanks for speaking on it.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Grandly stated! Thank you Brother of mines.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done and stated