Black Poetry : til time runs pain away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SmoovVerbiage, Aug 24, 2006.

  1. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Copyright© 2006
     
  2. Khasm13

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    thas some real ish right there...
    the pain was engrained soul deep in this piece....
    heartfelt joint smoov...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    And as you know, the answer lies within the title, time runs pain away. You captured that, what in the [email protected] am I going to do now, feeling, exeptionally well. Kudos!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely in due time all pain runs away yet pounder on that
    someone is gone . i felt this piece deeply from da heart sis.
     
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    aahhhh

    listen i got the point
    i'll starting calling more often from now on

    and your suffering will be gone

    i here until the day i'm done

    sweetie

    GT
     
  6. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich, Khasm, and watzinaname
    for your time and comments. I appreicate them.


    So'ja are you offering me
    some of your "pain killer"?:wink:


    YLSS
    SmoovV
     
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    most welcome sista surely what we have as pain will dem
    through time and space beyond emotions .
     
  8. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: hi

    good-aftenoon SmoovVerbiage,


    nice of u to post a new piece...


    ==
    ==
    ... how do I
    get pass expecting
    his voice at the other end
    of every phone call?

    please
    PLEASE
    somebody
    tell
    me
    ==
    ==



    all can relate as it happens like that sometimes... the one who once was so dear to thy heart, isn't anymore... most romantic relationships end up that way, as one can always cherish the good times u had while in the company of this man... still thy flow surely shall touch many sisters, as i guess us brothers need to wake up, and truly start loving thy nubian queens again... in all what u painted what a sister going through the motions and wondering why does one have to suffer, when it comes to getting thy heart broken literally...


    have a nice day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  9. 4EVERLUV

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    SmoovVerbiage:
    sista I gotta rep you on this one.
    You just scribed that past 6 mth of months my life.
    This is some real talk right here.

    Much luv
     
  10. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MrAfrica, though the emotions were lifted from a feminine heart
    and soul, I believe love, in pleasure and pain, is universal and both
    men and women should consider more than themselves when engaging
    in beginnings and endings of relationships. I always enjoy your visits :)

    4ever, It's always joy when a reader can relate.
    thank God, time definitely runs pain away


    Thanks soul-much you two


    SmoovV
    aka Cocobutterskyn
     
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