Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SmoovVerbiage, Aug 24, 2006.
thas some real ish right there...
the pain was engrained soul deep in this piece....
heartfelt joint smoov...
And as you know, the answer lies within the title, time runs pain away. You captured that, what in the [email protected] am I going to do now, feeling, exeptionally well. Kudos!
surely in due time all pain runs away yet pounder on that
someone is gone . i felt this piece deeply from da heart sis.
listen i got the point
i'll starting calling more often from now on
and your suffering will be gone
i here until the day i'm done
thank you Rich, Khasm, and watzinaname
for your time and comments. I appreicate them.
So'ja are you offering me
some of your "pain killer"?
most welcome sista surely what we have as pain will dem
through time and space beyond emotions .
nice of u to post a new piece...
... how do I
get pass expecting
his voice at the other end
of every phone call?
all can relate as it happens like that sometimes... the one who once was so dear to thy heart, isn't anymore... most romantic relationships end up that way, as one can always cherish the good times u had while in the company of this man... still thy flow surely shall touch many sisters, as i guess us brothers need to wake up, and truly start loving thy nubian queens again... in all what u painted what a sister going through the motions and wondering why does one have to suffer, when it comes to getting thy heart broken literally...
have a nice day...
sista I gotta rep you on this one.
You just scribed that past 6 mth of months my life.
This is some real talk right here.
MrAfrica, though the emotions were lifted from a feminine heart
and soul, I believe love, in pleasure and pain, is universal and both
men and women should consider more than themselves when engaging
in beginnings and endings of relationships. I always enjoy your visits
4ever, It's always joy when a reader can relate.
thank God, time definitely runs pain away
Thanks soul-much you two
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